.flow text walkthrough

I am drafting a text walkthrough for .flow (yes I know videos are better but I prefer text when possible and I have heard from others who do too). Would people be willing to look at it and try to use it and let me know what they think? I have never written a walkthrough before so I know I could use suggestions. Plus of course I need to know if my instructions are followable. I also don't know what fans tend to call the various NPCs and areas so please inform me on those. This is still in progress so not everything is complete. If you think I should add any sections please let me know.

I found the majority of the effects using version .09 and am not sure if all of them are in the same place in version .10 yet. I kinda burned myself out on the game writing what I have so far and need to take a break from the game for a bit, lol.

http://www.theneitherworld.com/yumenikki/flow/flowwalkthrough.txt

I would like to thank people who uploaded YT videos, especially BoomDead0, ilovemarioparty7, and crossmirage.

Sparky wrote:

I would like to thank people who uploaded YT videos, especially BoomDead0, ilovemarioparty7, and crossmirage.

Dohohoho~ You are quite welcome <3
And you should direct players South tho the flowers then East when trying to get the Helmet in Ghost world since it is much closer to the door than you think.
Also the Sugar menu type can be obtained from the Sugar Hole, Post 24 effects world after buying anything (I think)
Orange Menu type (Which I have only obtained from messing with the game) can be found in the room where you get the Machine effect. Its a switch I have yet to find, but once on, Oreko will be West of the table that gives you the Machine effect and she will transport you to where the Fisherman should be and interacting with the space there should give it to you.

I have skimmed through your guide a bit and It seems accurate, although I have my preferred routes. Especially with the Arm effect. You should head South East instead when you enter the White foggy area... I am sure you have seen my effects guide, and you should post the alternate route I took from Oreko's Lab as well, (For the sake of passing through my favorite areas that is) <3

hurray, I don't like using video walkthroughs, I much prefer reading them. You rock~

Also you can't change you're menu type the way you mentioned as of v0.10, that only leads to the Kaibutu school chase event now, but you can still change the menu by entering the school regularly, be it through the Sewers, the closed elevator that takes you to the alternate sewers, or Oreko's lab that takes you to the Alternate Sewers as well.
The Machine Effect can also be found a bit faster by going to Ghost/Flower world, then going south east two the pillars that take you underwater, going South into the deeper area, the south again into a Spike fence, then east too another Spike Structure then south from there through the other structure and climb down the stairs then into the door where it is.

And ogawd I lawl and all the names you gave the areas and structures, although sometimes it gets confusing...
But then again it's mainly since I named everything before...
Ogawd, I know several alternative Routes to getting many of the effects, I have the whole game map flow memorized so.... I shall pick it apart later